Hi guys. i made some story parts tell me what you think, oh and when theres these little things :
SSSSSSSS that means that another story part is starting. these are just peices of stories that i might make. i have only made these pars and which eve gets the most votes i will make a story out of that one.
Oh and a little fact about the last one. if anyone ants to know, i wrote it a couple hours after reading Beyond The herizon. Just a little fun fact.
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.....Screaming erupted all around me, making my ears shudder in pain. I struggled to block out the agonizing sounds, but they just got louder. I tossed and turned, begging the screams to subside.
“Annaaaaa! Annaaaaa!” a new scream joined the other countless screams, trying to make it’s self heard over all the others, but the other screams just got louder.
“STOP!” I screamed at the top of my lungs, trying to make myself heard.
“Annaaaaaa!” the voice screamed louder. The screams were growing closer every second.
I tried to run, but my feet wouldn’t move. I was glued to the spot. I looked all around me, horrified by what I saw. There wasn’t an escape anywhere around. Suddenly, everything went pitch black. The moon, stars and everything disappeared from sight. It was if a black cloak had been dropped over everything, making it all disappear.
The screams turned into screeches as they got closer. “STOP!” I screamed, but the screeches around me grew and began to screech more violently.
I could feel my eardrums begin to burst with pain from all the noise. I struggle to cover them with my shaking hands, but the voices wouldn’t cease.
“Please Stop!” I begged as salty tears cascaded down my pale face from the pain.
Suddenly, I bright light, about the size of a golf ball, appeared about 20 ft ahead of me. The screeches suddenly ceased and my feet were free from the grasp of the ground. I picked up one foot after another, hurrying toward the light. My feet struggled to keep me from falling as I ran through numerous jagged rocks.
As I ran, the light seemed to get further away with every heavy step I took, but I continued on, trying to get to the light that once seemed so near.
The light suddenly stopped moving, but just as suddenly, the ground beneath my shaking feet began to give way and I began to fall endlessly into more darkness beneath me. I reached around blindly, trying to take hold os something.
Suddenly, my right hand brushed up against something solid and hard. I reached over with both hands and took hold of something tight.
Too late, I realized that I had made a horrible mistake. Hysterical laughter erupted and whatever I took hold of pulled hard. I screamed, but I just got pulled in further toward the hysterical laughter. I flailed my arms and fought to get it to release me, but I was tight in it’s grasp.
Just as I was about to give up, I was pulled against something and I could feel the heat radiating off of it. I pulled away more, but I was just drug back in to be flat against where the heat was radiating off. I could feel a muscular chest up against my back. I immediately ceased my struggle and froze on the spot.
Hot breath brushed against my neck, chilling me to the bone. The soft lips of the monster brushed against my neck, sending shivers down my spine.
Suddenly, a bone chilling voice spoke against my neck. “Anna, you will be mine.....” and just as suddenly, I was released from the clutches and thrown back into the dark endless abyss. I screamed, shocked at what had just happened. My scream reached far above where I had fell and no echo returned. The only other noise to be heard was the bone chilling laugh as I fell deeper and deeper, far from anything.......
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS........Howls of starving wolves reached my shaking ears. The darkness closed around me like a cloak. The howls of the hungry wolves seemed to get closer with my every breathe. I ran faster, trying to get away from the blood thirsty howls.
Loose strands of hair fell from my high ponytail and what little makeup I did wear, smudged as I blindly ran through the dark forest. Twigs snapped beneath my heavy steps and tree branches smacked me in my face with the lightest touch, cutting my fair skin with every bristle.
My heart was beating with such ferocity that it seemed like it would burst any second. My legs and feet throbbed with horrible pain as more thorns cut deep within my soft flesh. Jagged rocks cut deep within my feet and sunk in deeper with every step I took.
My breathing was labored and I felt like my feet would fall off, but nonetheless, I pushed on, stretching my muscles to their limit.
The howls suddenly ceased. Instead, the pounding of paws against the twig and leaf scattered ground joined my heavy and uneven footsteps. My heart began to beat faster as I begged my legs to keep moving. Sweat made it’s way down my face and neck, soaking my shirt.
My muscles protested their greatest yet, but I still kept going, refusing to be made food for the wolves pounding behind me.
The pounding of swift paws behind me ceased and I took that chance to rest, letting my muscles pul themselves together to rest for the shortest of moments, but in that moment lay my fatal mistake.......
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS His chest pounded with anticipation. He needed to dom this. It was what they both needed. He couldn’t lead her on with false hope of any relationship any longer. It just wouldn’t be fair to either of them and he feared that his heart wouldn’t be able to take it much longer.
Suddenly, he saw her beautiful form walking toward him. Her hips swaying. The sun was setting in the background as she glided forward, filling the light, baby blue sky with glorious hues of stunning pinks, blues, purples, and more. The shining rays from the setting sun shadowed her beautiful body, making her seem to glow. The soft breeze blew her beautiful, silky blonde hair this way and that, making it shine like newly spun gold. Her beautiful crystal blue eyes twinkle, letting all the love show through and allowing anyone to see within their warm depths. He softly tanned skin shone like newly polished bronze, the effect of working long hard days beneath the suns warm shining rays.
The site before him was almost unbearable He hadn’t fallen in love with Callie for her amazing looks. It was her caring and nurturing personality that he had fallen for. That spark of fire that lit up n her crystal blue depths is what draw him to her. That fire that never seemed to extinguish. It lit up her eyes, showing that she was a fighter and would never give up, but at the same time, the care and love that she possessed for everyone was amazing. Even Callie’s worst enemy couldn’t be left hurt or otherwise. Callie was a kindhearted and fiery woman. Every guy in 10th grade loved her and wanted her by their side. Callie turned the heads of all when she passed by them, but she ceased to notice it all. No boy ever ceased to ask her out, even though his presence and relationship with her was well known.
Suddenly, Jesse was brought out of his thoughts as he saw the beautiful young Callie wave and let her eyes light up as that beautiful smile with perfect white teeth spread across her bronzed features.
That smile, long ago had made his heart melt into a messy puddle. He remembered the very day the had abruptly met. It was 5 years ago at a school dance. The end of the year dance. Oh how simple life seemed to be then. Never having a care in the world and letting your soul fly free around you. Oh how he missed those wonderful days that no longer existed in his life.
Callie was standing over to the side of the gym in which the dance has been held while she watched her friends glide across the dance floor with their boyfriends. He had watched her the whole time, wondering how such a wonderful girl could be left alone and at the sidelines. She glittered as her beautiful metallic silver dress sparkled in the glowing dance light. He had been drawn to her the moment she set foot onto the crowded dance floor. Her hair done up in a loose bun with stray strands of beautiful blonde hair falling to the sides of her face, framing it beautifully.
Her eyes had held sorrow that night, sorrow and hope. For what, he never found out. He had waited hours watching her stand at the sidelines while she watched everyone around her dance and laugh. When he had finally gotten up the courage to ask her to dance, she was about to leave through the long forgotten exit door on the far end of the gym. He could see her easy and flowing footsteps walk toward the exit. He had ran to her as fast as he could, all the while thinking about how he would ask her to dance and before he knew it, he was by her side breathing heavily. While he tried to catch his run away breath, she just looked at him, her beautiful eyes filled with sorrow deeper than ever before and wonder was that just visible in the sea of sorrow.
In between breaths, he had asked her for one dance before she left and she accepted, the little tints of hope growing larger in her eyes with every breath. From that day on Jesse and Callie grew closer each and every day.
Just those wonderful thoughts had brought a small smile to his tanned face. He wished for those days again. He missed all the time they shared and the wonderful relationship that they had once had together.
One salty tear had escaped his emerald eyes, but only one. Callie’s easy and slow steps suddenly ceased and she stood there before him. Jesse looked down into her beautiful blue eyes. Worry plagued those twinkling eyes of hers.
“Jesse, are you ok?” Callie asked as slowly raise a softly bronzed hand up to his cheek to wipe away the stray tear. He slowly raised up a gently tanned hand to cover hers as he closed his emerald orbs and took in the feeling of how her hand made him feel and how it once did before. The feeling was no longer there. Nothing resided behind the feel of her hand on his cheek.
He slowly moved her hand away from his cheek and brushed his thin lips across her knuckles, hoping that he would feel something, anything to make him not be able to tell her the truth, but still nothing game him the spark it once did.
“Jesse, you said that you wanted to talk?” Callie questioned once he had dropped her hand and opened is emerald orbs and looked into her crystal blue ones. They were clouded with worry and fear. It pained him to see her like that and it helped with nothing that he was going to say. “Callie....” He started hesitantly. His voice was low and filled with pain. He had never done this before and it left him in agony with the knowledge of what he was about to do to her.
His emerald orbs looked into her crystal blue ones and started once more, taking a deep breath. “Callie, I can’t so this anymore.” He hurriedly looked away once he saw the pain and agony that flooded those beautiful eyes of hers. He couldn’t bare to take one look and thus ruining the thing he was about to finish saying. “Things just aren’t the same as they used to be. Maybe we should take a break.” He waited a few moment for her to reply, but she didn’t and he knew that he had caused her pain. “I’m so sorry Callie.” His voice cracking at the end.
I raised my adverted eyes to look into her once kind eyes only to be taken aback. Pain was flooding those crystal blue orbs. That pain, it was deeper than any he had ever seen before and it frightened him. The pain wasn’t that of which people have that just glazes over their eyes. No, this pain leaked deep within her soul, consuming it. It was the pain that someone had when losing something so close to them that it hurt more than anything.
That pain that was consuming her was soon replaced by flaring anger. Boiling hot anger that flared like a roaring fire. Silent tears cascaded down Callie’s beautifully toned face, totally unnoticed by the teen whatsoever and leaving sticky trails in their wake.
“Jesse, how could you?”Her voice was laced with venom in every word. It was low and just above a whisper, but it was worst than if she had yelled.
“Callie, I-” He started, but Callie cut him off, not giving him even the slightest chance.
“Stop, I don’t want to hear it Jesse.” Her voice shook, but the venom from her earlier words still lie beneath those that she now spoke. He stepped forward to try and comfort her, but she took a step back. “Don’t”Callie demanded as she put an arm out to make sure that he didn’t come any closer. Her voice was still just above a whisper and it stung him tp hear the venom in her words directed at him.
His heart broke into pieces as she held out an arm to not let him come further. No matter what the situation was, the had always comforted one another to the fullest. He had thought, hoped, that even if there could be no boyfriend girlfriend relationship that they could still be friends.
Callie just shook her head and turned to walk away, her head bowed and her arms holding herself. He rushed forward and wrapped his arms around her frail form to try and comfort her the best that he could.
Callie immediately stiffened and pulled away from his arms. She turned around and slapped Jesse hard in the face. Who did he think he was? She had thought angrily as she stared into his emerald green eyes before screaming into his hurt face. “Don’t give me that crap. You don’t dump someone and then try to comfort them afterwards.”
More fierce tears stained her face as her anger grew, faring p inside her like a hungry dragon waiting to be freed.
“You have no idea what you’ve just done.” He voice dripped with venom as her eyes turned cold and her fist balled up. There was just a flicker of pain left in her old blue eyes as the anger took over like a poison. Before he even comprehended what was happening, her balled up fist connected with his face, knocking him backwards. A bruise was already forming where her fist had slammed into his face.
Before he could say anything, Callie had already turned and began to leave. Her retreating form no longer glowing in the beautiful way that made her light up as the setting sun sunk deeper beneath the horizon. No, she now glowed with fury and hatred. The sun sunk deeper and deeper with every second she took leaving, never once looking back and all he could do was stare after her with eyes that were clouded with pure sadness. What had he done.......
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