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sportychick
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« on: May 26, 2008, 11:26:52 AM »

i was walking down the road when i heard a rustling noise. i stopped and waited when a girl my age jumped on me. shhh said the girl. he's coming...............................................
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« Reply #1 on: May 26, 2008, 05:38:22 PM »

"whos comming?!" I exclaimed as I shoved this girl off.
"He....is comming beware!" said the girl as she passed out.
I dragged her into the bushes and............
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« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2008, 05:59:48 AM »

tryed to revive her, my efforts proved furtile.

all of a sudden i heard the even pace of footsteps getting nearer and nearer, ever so slightly i moved to get a better look at him, he was .....
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« Reply #3 on: June 02, 2008, 05:25:59 AM »

okay here's the second part.
"who's coming i asked, he the great leader if the bushwell tribe, my mother and me must stay in that tribe but we have terrible times in there. the girl said
come now, or he will think that you've been with me and he will abuse you to you tell him where i am... lets go!
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« Reply #4 on: June 11, 2008, 11:09:29 AM »

We Ran Through The Prickly Bushes, Scratching Ourselves In The Meantime But We Didn't Care, All That Mattered Was Getting Away. Five Minutes Later We Were Still Running, Dodging The Animals, With Sweat Dripping Off Our Foreheads When...
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« Reply #5 on: June 11, 2008, 12:05:25 PM »

We Ran Through The Prickly Bushes, Scratching Ourselves In The Meantime But We Didn't Care, All That Mattered Was Getting Away. Five Minutes Later We Were Still Running, Dodging The Animals, With Sweat Dripping Off Our Foreheads When...
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« Reply #6 on: June 11, 2008, 10:17:32 PM »

suddenly i tripped, i stuck my hand out in front to save my face, i could hear someone coming, scrambling to my feet i kept going my eyes stinging and streaimg from being wacked in the face by branches...
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« Reply #7 on: June 14, 2008, 01:05:51 PM »

okay here's part 3:
someone grabbed me, and the girl, where are you taking us? i asked you-will-see- said the person you shall get your punishment....................
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« Reply #8 on: June 17, 2008, 04:50:48 AM »

i kicked and clawed at his hands, struggling to get free, all he did was enclose his arms around me tighter, taking a deep breath i said in the clamest voice i could muster "and if i don't come?'"  "you havn't a choce" was the cold reply. i stoped strugling and he loosened his grip, thinking on impulse i spun around, pushing him off balance for a split second, just enough time to get away grabbing the girls hand we headed the only way we could go, forward. not knowing where it would lead us...
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« Reply #9 on: June 17, 2008, 10:36:45 AM »

i kicked and clawed at his hands, struggling to get free, all he did was enclose his arms around me tighter, taking a deep breath i said in the clamest voice i could muster "and if i don't come?'"  "you havn't a choce" was the cold reply. i stoped strugling and he loosened his grip, thinking on impulse i spun around, pushing him off balance for a split second, just enough time to get away grabbing the girls hand we headed the only way we could go, forward. not knowing where it would lead us...
brilliant horsecrazy!
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« Reply #10 on: June 20, 2008, 04:17:38 AM »

haha

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« Reply #11 on: June 22, 2008, 09:41:37 AM »

ur welcome Wink Grin
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« Reply #12 on: November 30, 2008, 09:45:07 AM »

they threw us down by a campfire, HELP!!! we shouted. 'keep your mouths shut' they said.'or we will burn you alive'...
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« Reply #13 on: December 01, 2008, 07:44:05 PM »

i burned with hatred, i wont give up
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« Reply #14 on: December 02, 2008, 11:30:23 AM »

i looked at the girl, she was sobbing quietly, i knew i had to do something..but what?
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