what do u think?

[HorseZ mad]

what do u think?

Walking out in to the empty yard; the icy November breeze hit Hazel full in the face, it seen shivers down her spin . She hurried in to the barn, where she was greeted  by  whiney from most of the horse wanting there breakfast. But there was  one thing different in the barn, but  what was it? She thought  as she scanned  the barn floor to ceiling and side to side . Then her  eyes fell on the last stall in the barn, there was no head  over the door . It was Blossom’s stall she always came to greet her. What was the matter? She made her way quickly down the aisle between the stall breaking in to a run a few metres away. The door was just  push to ,maybe by the wind, and Blossom was not there.  She did not panics as she knew exactly where she would be. She walked out of the barn and up the path to where the paddocks where and there in the one with the most grass was the little grey pony.  This had  happened a couple of time and she was always the same little cheeky pony to catch , thinking more about her stomach than anything.

[sportygal]

its good

[deferential]

good start

[horsezandponyz]

great start!  u could like be famous 1 day!

[Alyssa]

That's not a bad start! Good job.

[clooneyfan]

ya!