A Few of My Poems

So...I worte these, kinda spontaniously. My friend loves them, and all my other friends say they are great, espacially the first ones....but you know....I dunno. So, I just wanted others to read thema and I want an honest reply!

Dying Rose

I didn't know
Something could
Hurt like this
Or tears could be
Silently shed
But suddenly thats
How I feel every,
Single Day
And I don't know when it will stop.

So I shut my eyes
And fall into the darkness
But even then it's not gone
Becuase it never really
Will be
But then the real tears
Come
But there's no one there
To catch them as they fall

And throught it all
I feel like a rose
Someone left out of water-
Crumbling, and falling, disappearing
To all
But, what makes me me is already gone
And so they step over me
Trying to look past it
And not careing
Enough to fix me
So I'm
Left
Alone
Again
Ignored, by all
As they notice the other,
More beautiful
Roses
And look past
This sad, dying one.
I shout out
Try to make myself heard
But they turn away
Deaf in one ear.
So I'm left alone
In the darkness
To crumble and die
Only to hope for
Someone
To bring me back to life.

Sorry about the longness.....lol, is it good?

Another one---

Broken Promises

Promises
Are stars, twinkling through life
That make you smile
And nod
And love life
Like never before

But when they get broken
It's a terrible thing
And suddenly
They are
Tears
Running down my face

And along with the
Promise
My heart
Is being broken
And I'm wishing
They were stars once again.

I really like the ending on that one....which is weird cause I usually can't write endings worth heck so....yea.

Color

How do you know
If you've lived life right?

Have you cried
Because you're happy?
Felt your stomach turn?
Gotten yourself dizzy
Just having fun?

So many little things
Can complete a day
But if you don't notice
It really
Doesn't matter
Cause thats living life
Black and white
And you want it...
Full of color.

Haha, not my best.....after effect of a late night writing need.

Rainbow of Feeling

Feelings are like colors
Swirling inside you
Sometimes it's solid
But most times it's not
And sometimes
Your heart lets the color out
But other times
It's kept inside
Until suddenly it's out
Like a rainbow in the sky
And people can clearly see it

But the thing about colors
Is that they can quickly change
As can your feelings
So let them out often
And change your colors
And let your heart
Empty
So it can be bright and brand new.

One I had in my head for a while.....didn't turn out as well as I thought but....you know.

Thats all for now.....but I write when I'm stressed or have something on my mind....and lately thats been happening a lot. I'm sure I'll have plenty more...but only if you like them!

And tell me TRUTHFULLY. I might get mad and defensive but thats just me, tell me anyway!! Cheesy

Hehe! Bye....I'm done now.... Tongue