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« on: March 27, 2009, 08:58:49 AM »

As Ty Baldwin Heartlands 17 year old lead stable hand walked out the front barn after muking out the last stall, and was just in time to see Amy attempt to jump Sky. As he came closer to the jump the rearedup and Amy fell of backwards and hit the ground with a thump.
     "AMY!"yelled Ty as he dropped the wheelbarrow and ra twords the round ring and jumped over the fence and knelt down beside her head "Amy waske up! Amy? JACK!!!!"
   "Ty what is it?" asked Jack as he came running out of the house
   "Amy fell off of Sky while attempting to jump him I think she might just have the wind knocked out of her. Go and take her to the house I'll catch Sky and un-saddle him put him in his stall and be to the house as soon as I can." instructed Ty as he stood up and watched Jack pick Amy up and carry her to the house
   "Here boy it's ok I'm not going to hurt you." But as Ty got closer Sky snorted and troted away. Ty turned his back on the Gray gelding and walked slowly to him. When he got close enough he grabed Sky's bridle and lead him out of the ring and to the house.
   Ty walked into the weather beaten house and sees Amy on the couch sipping some tea.
   "Amy, how are you feeling?" Ty asked.
   "I'm fine. Thanks," Amy brushes off his concern. "Is Sky okay? I knew I was pushing him to hard?" Amy said.
   "Amy, your being to hard on yourself. I even though he was ready for that jump." Ty said.
   "Ty, I just knew he wasn't ready. I felt him tensing under me. I just don't understand why I didn't listen to him." Amy said, showing her disappointment in herself.
   "We just need to learn from our mistakes, Amy." Ty said trying to comfort Amy. "He's waiting outside for you. You don't want to end on a bad note, do you?" Ty said, smiling at her. Cheering Amy up slightly, she got up to go back and work with Sky.
   As Amy and Ty walked back to the barn and saw sky in his stall still fully tacked.
   "Hey fella how you doin'?"asked Amy as she walked up to Sky. Sky nickered and Amy smiled because Sky had forgave her
   "Well it looks like he's not mad at you any more!"said Ty with a grin
   "I guess not." Amy said as Sky gave her a gentle nudge. "Lets go Sky." she hopped into the saddle near the mounting post.
   Amy started out in a nice walk and then a trot "Lets finish off on a good note and at least canter around twice." She said and pushed her heals into Skys flanks and cantered smoothly. Amy let him canter around twice and then walked him out of the ring catching Ty's eyes as she walked by she smiled and quickly look away feeling the blood rise to her cheeks
   "That was a good way to end the session." said Ty as Amy dissmounted and started to walk towards the barn.
   "Yeah he didn't have any falter in his stride." Amy replyed as Ty came and walked next to her. "We should try to at least set up the jumps but have him trot and canter next to them so he can get over his fears. We'll do that for a few sessions and then mabey late next week we can try him over some real small jumps."
   "Yeah, I was thinking that too. I guess great minds think alike." Ty said making Amy blush. He noticed, but he didn't do anything to rub it in Amy's face. Amy rubbed down Sky and gave him a treat then walked with Ty to the house for some lunch. They walked into the house discussing that they should do trotting poles then jumps. Amy fixed them each a sandwich while Ty poured some tea for them.

This was in the other one I had started but no one ever finished it! Please lets keep this going! It's really getting good! Grin Grin
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« Reply #1 on: March 27, 2009, 09:06:59 AM »

Wow! It's actually longer than I though it was!!!! Shocked
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« Reply #2 on: January 08, 2010, 09:50:49 AM »

The two went outside to chat under the tree in Pegasuses' field.
"Hey! Love birds!" Amy and Ty spun round to see Jack leaning on the fence, squinting in the late afternon sun. "Have you any idea how long you've been sitting there chatting? This farm dosen't run itself, the horses need feeding!" And with that Jack turned and walked back to the house, a smile on his face.
"Come on lets get going, super will be ready soon and we don't want to be late for that!" Ty said hastily getting up and brushing the green August grass off his jeans. He then put out his hands to help Amy up, Amy reached out and took hold of Ty's outstretched hands.
"Hmm," Was what Amy heard herself mumble in agreement as she felt rough and warm hands holding her own, they were the hands of her friend and boyfriend. Amy looked up and for a moment all she could see was Ty. His dark hair sticking up in all directions with his floppy fringe, deep dark eyes, smooth tanned skin and his smiling lips. Amy looked back into Ty's eyes again as they became level wirth her own and then in one moment that seemed to last for eternity she felt their noses brush and their lips touch, gently pressed. Smooth as silk the moment slipped away as silently as it had arrived. Ty leaned back, Amy could never read his eyes but she could sence the fizzing happiness.
Amy broke into a jog and leaped over the fence soon followed by Ty as they raced into the feedroom where Ben was already pouring out feeds.

Amy woke at 5AM which was early for her, she switched off her alarm clock and rolled out of bed. She quicckly and silently like the dawn  changed intto her pair of old sweat pants and a thick sweater. As she ran out into the calm yard she slowley made her way to Skys stable. He looked up when she aproached.

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« Reply #3 on: January 08, 2010, 10:28:44 AM »

-i know knowone has written in this message to continue the story for ages and what happened to the other part? Anyway did i continue in the right place from there cause now we have to versions...anyway if anyone still wants to write this book then lets continue!!!
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« Reply #4 on: January 08, 2010, 12:41:29 PM »

Sky looked up as she approached.
"Hey, boy." Amy camly wispered in his ear as she started doing some T-touch on him and he wickered back resting his head on the stable door.
15 minuets later Amy was leading the dapled horse out of his stable and into the outdoor arena where yesterdays course was still set up. Being careful to shut the gate behind her Amy calmly and slowly lead Sky around the edge of the track. She then cut across the centre of the arena, stopping to do T-touch movements when he became tense. After several turns through the middle sky was relaxed and Amy was able to guid him around all the jumps, the sun had risen and the sky was now a very pale blue.
Amy lead Sky back to his stall and then began to prepare the feeds for Ben and Ty to give out. She then ran back to the house where Lou, Amy's older sister who was incharge of finance at Heartland was in her dressing gown making scrambled eggs and bacon, Jack, Amy and Lou's grandfather was sitting at the kitchen table sorting through the mail, "Anything for me?" Amy called as she dashed passed them on her way upstairs,"Errr...year, there's a letter from Soraya."
"Soraya!" Amy cried and screached to a halt to grab the letter, thank her granddad and hurried back up the stairs.
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« Reply #5 on: January 08, 2010, 12:43:33 PM »

I thought we could set the story while Amy is still at school but kind of timeless.
If you don't lioke it, just copy and paste my stuff but change the stuff that makes in in the past...but don't take my work pls! thanks!
ps; does anyone like it??? x
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« Reply #6 on: January 08, 2010, 03:22:31 PM »

i like it!  Grin
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« Reply #7 on: January 09, 2010, 08:23:49 AM »

so glad someone likes it!!! x
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